
Two pieces of a puzzle
that couldn’t hold their tongue
got into a messy tussle,
deciding who's in the wrong.
The blue piece argued loudly
„I make up entire sky!”
While yellow still stood proudly
and wouldn’t let it fly.
The shining yellow piece,
so quiet and so mellow,
released her inner beast
and long surpressed bellow.
„I am the only reason
you have that colour, bright!
You’d be forever freezin’
without my mighty light!”
„Oh, please!
You’re nothing but a dot.
A mediocre star, a sneeze,
who just so happens to be hot.”
„Oh, is that now what you think?”
asked yellow, deeply hurt.
Without a single blink
was gone with no revert.
The blue in everlasting gloom
only now just realized.
Perhaps it’s not his final tomb,
his viewpoint had been compromized.
He’s not the sprawling sky he’d thought -
but found himself to be a part
of pants that Homer Simpson bought
on sale from local Kwik-E-Mart.
The yellow piece did get her own
call back into reality.
But giving up her fancy throne
to her was just formality.
Turns out she’s not the bellybutton
of the entire universe.
And all the things she thought were spot on
are actually, in fact, reversed.
Now one of them got put in place
on edge of Homer’s trouser leg.
The other found its resting place
on talking sponge’s square shaped head.
Two pieces of the puzzles
that never really matched.
Two pieces of the puzzles
that had to be detached.
Two pieces of the puzzles
who grew used to hearing threats.
Two pieces of the puzzles -
they came from different sets.
About the Creator
Cristal S.
I’ve noticed when I follow the path I enjoy most, I often end up swimming upstream. So here I am, right in the middle of it – writing about it all and more. ♡
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Comments (3)
Very clever! 😁
Bringing pieces of a puzzle to life was so clever. You certainly can find poetry anywhere. 🧩
Wow. There were some big components to this one! Great job! Extremely creative