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Persimmons

A Poem

By Laura PruettPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

A spirit’s breath sparkles cold on the windowpane

As I shiver with delight;

Flowers crinkle underfoot,

Frozen in the night

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Gloved hands stuff deep into pockets warm

Before they touch a nose;

The children laugh and run away,

With ecstasy that glows

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The foals and kids can’t keep inside

The pleasure that they feel;

They romp and play and frolic too;

They can't believe it’s real

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The play is tempting – yes indeed –

I stop and watch a while;

The children run and trip and fall

And roll up in a pile

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But I go to pick the first good fruits

That ripened overnight,

For though you can munch them before,

The frost makes them taste just right!

nature poetry

About the Creator

Laura Pruett

Laura Pruett, author of The Dwarves Of Dimmerdown and others.

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  1. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred about a year ago

    Just to let you know I have recommended this piece for a Top Story in this weeks Vocal Raise Your Voice here https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-12-05-2024%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Really delightful poem, Laura! Never had a fresh persimmons and now I wish I had

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is lovely. Well done.

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    This is a lovely take on the challenge, the perspective hits a bit different thinking about the persimmons and foals mentioned.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Ooooh this made me feel chilly and craving hot chocolate!

  • Love take on the challenge with an unusual fruit

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