in the odeepest depths,
of our souls,
exists the desire to be perfect,
yet we are not,
we weren’t meant to be!!
perfection is a virtue,
exceeding the normal;
we’re all normal, mostly,
perfection requires,
multitudes of deliverance,
a trait reserved for those worthy of,
who lacks negativity,
in the positive mind??
not any of us,
we all fail the endurance test!!
look,
see the value of,
minds in suspension!!
see the worth of,
souls in repent!!
see the detention of,
moments in awe!!
see the quest of,
generations without direction!!
alas, we know where the future unfolds,
we know where the treasure is hidden,
searching for today,
we know,
life is without age,
as we search!!
another journey to the center of the mind, thank you for reading 👍
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you



Comments (4)
Profound and poignant. If we were perfect, there'd be no need for God.
Whoaaaa, this was so powerful! Loved your poem so much!
Spectacular slam poem!!!❤️❤️💕
"we’re all normal, mostly" Nailed it! A very thoughtful, well-written piece, buddy!