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Pemaquid Point

memories of summer are memories of my mother

By Raistlin AllenPublished 5 years ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in The Sonnet of Shadows Challenge
Picture of a picture; original photo credit to my dad

On that day we sat and watched the ocean,

I in my teenage struggles couldn’t think

the story that would blow this wound open,

and leave me longing for a stronger drink.

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Today I went back and you were not there.

I watched the caps of rocks covered with moss;

the maddened waves clapped at the salty air,

fed with the millionth retelling of loss.

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I heard your laughter, felt your sun-brushed skin

as you sat beside me in our private bay,

the water pulling out as we breathed in.

Captured in frame, I remember that day

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How our souls touched like shards of broken glass;

How you always did say: This, too, shall pass.

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  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    Congratulations on your runner up placement! 🎉🎉

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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