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Pebble Treble

Immense pride and joy will bring...

By Rowan Finley Published 6 years ago 1 min read

Small white pebble

Of high note treble

A singular song does sing

Immense pride and joy will bring

River blushing and rushing

Loving touch and waters hushing

The more the caress and more the finesse

Pebble much to explore

River cannot help but adore

Hand in hand through river bottom flow

Skin smoother and smoother as they go

Harmonies may not last forever

As river widens, propels like a lever

Pebble into greedy sea grumble

All can be heard is forlorn mumble

River cry, river cry

Pebble cannot deny, deny

That ever there was a love so sweet

When they flowed down to love song’s beat

vintage

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal11 months ago

    It’s filled with deep, quiet emotion. Love and nature really sing in this! 🌊✨ What’s your favorite outdoor setting to get creative in?

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