"PEACE PLEASE"
"NO MORE TROUBLES"
I wrote this poem after watching the news across the globe. I needed to express my thoughts through words and a song.
I look at the news.
I look at confusion
of realities
of the blues of the news.
People hate, throw slurs
of their blurs
of society
of woes
of lies
of mass proportions of gossip
of terror
of wars
of the dark side of humanity,
as I get my bow and arrow
ready.
But wait it is not violence I want
to tie
into their hate
and debate
of pride and the other sides
of point of view.
This is my cue
to spread love
peace
and
freedom beyond borders of
fences and hate
to spread love and peace not hate.
So, I write about the thoughts of my brain
trying to keep sane,
knowing that life is what it is
and what it was,
cause
I love freedom.
I love democracy of choices.
The price of freedom is
bombs or mob bosses.
But of me and you and all
as I recall
to live and let live.
I turn off the news
of the blues
of war
of hate
and the bait.
Tonight is out of sight.
Let's rock tonight.
I look at the verse.
What could be worse
than not to belong
to a hate group of sorts?
Actually, believing one is superior to two.
So, we leave it to the courts
of petty lies of despair
from the criminals of time and space.
Do I care?
I choose love and peace
to humanity of a sort of all
people.
We lease
the earth.
For what it's worth.
We are all unique souls
of life, birth, and death
around the globe
of this earth
For what it's worth
of humanity
of the light,
not the dark
in the night.
We bring the light.
Let's love,
hug
and not tug
on each others' souls
of old.
Peace, love, and light.
Written By
VICKI LAWANA TRUSSELLI
FEBRUARY 9, 2024
About the Creator
Vicki Lawana Trusselli
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I am a storyteller. This is where memory meets mysticism, music, multi-media, video, paranormal, rebellion, art, and life.
I nursing, business, & journalism in college. I worked in the film & music industry in LA, CA.
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Comments (28)
Gandhi said "Be the change you want to see in the world." Gandhi changed, but the world did not. This does not invalidate the importance of changing one's own heart. Even the tragic end of the Christ figure (which, in Gandhi's own culture, he certainly was) points to a change that happens beyond the labyrinth of society, the real and important liminal change that precedes the temporal! My hope is that a day will come when "Christ" can walk among us without going to the cross! Then and only then will we know the world has truly changed. Well-wrought! I'll add this plea for peace to the comment section of my CREATION MYTH as an introduction to your work! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/creation-myth-m8dm0x8d%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Congrats on TS!π₯³
Thank you for writing something that can resonate so strongly with all of us Peace-makers. π₯°πποΈ It's really cool that it flows like a stream of consciousness, each thought leading to the next like your inner dialogue in poem-form. Well done.
Fabulously composed message! π
Wow! Thank you πβ€οΈ
Move over Lennon, I say ππ
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I love the way you will explain the wordsβ€οΈπ
Some excellent points, love the form
Amazing! I loved everything about this! Congrats, Vicki!
Congratulations on your Top Story Vicki... This is so well deserved!!! β€οΈπ
Well-deserved congratulations for your workβkeep it up!
Congrats on top story! Great work!
If dreams were wishes β¦ is it really so hard, does world need to always be in strife. It is beautiful that you wrote this Congratulations
Back to congratulate you on well-deserved Top Story!
Ceasefire now.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
So many sentiments expressed so concisely and perfectly! Well done Vicki and congrats on the TS
Nicely done! Congrats on the TS.
Very powerful beautiful poem!
This was so profound, poignant and powerful! Let's just show everyone kindness and love!
Vicki this shows your empathy and love for the world. Itβs also relatable and why I no longer watch the news. Well written my friend.
Lovely poem and insightful
Let's love, hug and not tug on each others' souls Love this line!!
This really touches my soul Vicki. I am inspired by this!