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Patchwork Mouse

A poem

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Nightcafe creation

Tippity Tippity

Tap Tap Tap

I don’t know what it is

But it has woke me up

2 AM running across

The hardwood floor

The sound of little toes

Clickity clack

Clickity clack

Chit chit chit

I hear a gnawing in

Dresser drawer

Little teeth chewing

Their way through

The wood to make a

Nest in my underwear

I can stand it no more

I get up to catch

My demon foe

When what should

My eyes behold

But a multicolored

Patchwork mouse

Living inside my

Lacey unmentionables.

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Ohhhh, I love this sweet poem. "But a multicolored Patchwork mouse Living inside my Lacey unmentionables." Hahahaha, love!

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    This is so good and the sounds you use are brilliant. You have written so much. anyhow, trying to catch up. Love this fun little piece!!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    How sweet 😁

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Love the humour in this! The image is also gorgeous. “2 AM running across The hardwood floor” Is my favourite part

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Lacey unmentionables...hehe. Loved this bit of cuteness, Sharon! Well done and a fine take on Poppy's prompt thing! :)

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    What a cute little "tail!" Well done!

  • Heheheheheheh this was so cute! So well done!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I love this one, the nest in the underwear, the trying to ignore but the brain making stories. Nice job.

  • This is such a sweet poem;;; love the repetition and onomatopoeia!

  • Atomic Historian2 years ago

    I love it!! Similar vibe to Tyrone the Tumbling Turtle

  • Cute story 💕

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