Part 2 – The Rain That Replied
A soft answer from the sky to a heart unheard — when no one else listens, the rain remembers.

And then it spoke—not loud or clear,
But soft enough for me to hear
In every splash, in every sigh,
A voice beneath the weeping sky
It told me, “You are not unseen
You're in the spaces in between
You're in the soil, the cloud, the air—
You are the storm, the silent prayer”
It didn’t fix what broke inside,
But washed the places I would hide
And when it stopped, I felt the trace,
Of something healing in its place
So now when skies begin to cry,
I don’t run in or wonder why
I step outside and let it speak—
The voice I need when I feel weak
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About the Creator
Mahmood Afridi
I write about the quiet moments we often overlook — healing, self-growth, and the beauty hidden in everyday life. If you've ever felt lost in the noise, my words are a pause. Let's find meaning in the stillness, together.
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Outstanding
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters




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Rain as a friend in need for whoever needs.
Nice work 👍