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All eyes on my trail
Tissue on the restroom floor
Hitched a ride inside
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Hi D-Bud - Thought of you from Kristen's comment (below). She has been flying back/forth across the country moving her entire family. As you know; so frustrating. Thank you for the lovely compliment re; our story. Such a step by step compilation with, "No let's not do it that way - not let's do it this way," all the way through. I don't even have a pallet of colored pencils; she did the eyelashes and most of the colorizing. I wrote 'Hit me Again' with our Generation in mind: Hope you get a chance to view it; you may relate. J-bud
Oh no!! I literally said that outloud as I read this!! I can imagine it and the feel that second hand embarassment already!! Great work!!
haha! Yep. Happend to me on an airplane... good one!
So good and true. 🤣🤣
Ah, Dana, I'd say you're on a roll. (Or is it on you?)
Lol, I've watched this in a movie before and it was hilarious! Loved your Senryu!
haha! stop reliving my past! too funny and true, bud!
Love this, too funny 😂😂😂🥰👏
Amusing!
There is a lot of toilet humour on Vocal today. It's similar to tucking your skirt into your underpants - you've got to hope someone tells you....
I love it buddy 😊😊
Somebody's gonna tell you, right?
😂🤣😅🤣 You know, it's hard to write one of these, let alone get a real reaction out of them! Well done! LOVE this!
😂 Damn hitchhikers!
Hahaha good one Dana.
An argument for bidets.
Lol very funny, Dana! Always super embarrassing when this happens
Lol. Good one.
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Nice 😁💬✌️