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Paper Hearts and Hollow Rooms

Be careful they are fragile

By Marie381Uk Published 3 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Gir 2025

Paper Hearts and Hollow Rooms

We built our home from paper hearts.

They fluttered when we spoke too loud.

You said love was a fragile thing,

I laughed because I thought you were joking.

We painted over the cracks with promises.

We held our fears in jars like fireflies.

Nights became longer, words became slower,

and silence made its bed between us.

One morning the walls sighed and gave in.

A storm came and tore the hearts apart.

I tried to gather what was left,

but everything soft had turned to ash.

Now I walk through hollow rooms,

where echoes pretend to be your voice.

And still I whisper back,

because ghosts deserve answers too.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Rasma Raisters3 months ago

    An excellent reflection on things past,

  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    This is a thoughtful reflection on what we should always do to remember. Good job.

  • Excellent take on the fragility of things

  • Beautiful, I am 'in' your poem when I read it, thankyou for sharing xx

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