Paper Bag in the sky Haiku
Up up up it goes touching the clouds
By George’s Girl 2024
Paper bag ascends,
Blown high to the cloud's embrace,
Drifting with the wind.
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Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (17)
Brilliant :) ! Love it and Congratulations for Runner-Up Sky-ku Challenge so Happy for You :) !
Simply beautiful 🤍
Drifting with the wind. Stunning Haiku! Nicely Done!1
Congrats on runner up!
Very well done! Simple and stunning!
Reminds me of American Beauty
Congrats to the runner up, well deserved with these fine lines. As long as it is paper bags, I started thinking of the massive plastic pollution reading your words!
Great haiku. Congrats.
Congrats!
Congrats on placing in the challenge ✅… very cleverly imaginative! It’s amazing how far bags can ascend!
I can see it in my mind wafting in the wind. Nice job!
Beauty in man's detritus. So simply but deeply evoked.
This is a wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win!
This is a wonderful poem. Congratulations!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Fabulous!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕
Seeing bags suspended in the sky. Would never have thought of that but your imagery is so powerful it reminds me of all the bags, balloons, sneakers and other detritus I have seen attached to telegraph cables or stuck in trees. Brings it all to life. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win.