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Pale blue fire

Haiku

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

maybe I’ll catch your

smoke 🔥

In the pale blue fire,

You cook wild❤️

dear

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Madoka Mori3 years ago

    Loved the structure here, and the phrasing is *mwah* Loved the video too!

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Very Cool! Made me Giggle 😃

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Supercute!!

  • Wow... the video is great!!😂

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  • Beautiful!

  • I don't understand!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    I really love the term "pale blue fire". That is so beautiful! Also, the way you structured this haiku is very unique - Love it!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fantastic!!!🥰

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