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Pain of Persistence

This poem is a cathartic release for me, excuse my mess.

By Lolly VieiraPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
Pain of Persistence
Photo by Stuart Timms on Unsplash

I can’t take it anymore..

and yet, I do.

Still breathing through bruised hours,

still rising like a prayer

too tired to touch the sky.

I’m tired of being tried,

of resilience rusting into ritual,

my shine dimmed down

to something dull and scraped,

as if I was made to be

the leather on life’s knuckles.

I don’t even know who I fight for.

Maybe it’s me.

Maybe it’s the world.

Maybe it's no one.

Maybe it’s the ache that refuses to leave

without first being understood.

Some days,

pain does not knock.

It breaks the lock and walks in,

wiping its feet on my soul,

demanding I offer it tea

and call it a guest.

And I, weary temple,

I still host.

Still hold.

Still carry.

Shattered glass pretending to be

a stained-glass window,

expected to glow with grace

as if the cracks were never there.

They are.

But maybe so am I.

Free VerseMental Healthsad poetryStream of Consciousnesssocial commentary

About the Creator

Lolly Vieira

Welcome to my writing page where I make sense of all the facets of myself.

I'm an artist of many mediums and strive to know and do better every day.

https://linktr.ee/lollyslittlelovelies

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  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    Wow! This is such a powerful piece, Lolly! The characterization of pain in the lines, "It breaks the lock and walks in, wiping its feet on my soul, demanding I offer it tea and call it a guest" was so incredibly well done.

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