*breeze*
breath
through grass .
~ / \ |
s p a c e
of mind
heart .
~ / \ |
lungs
full
sweet sky .
~ / \ |
s e l f
e x p a n s i o n .
`' `' `'
e a r t h
warm
m o t h e r .
`' `' `'
t o e s
curl
raw home .
`' `' `'
dynamic
flow .
`' `' `'
l i f e
f o u n d a t i o n .
* * *
* s t i l l *
calm
as One .
* * *
breath
{ p a u s e d }
S i l e n c e .
* * *
stars
out
and in .
* * *
b e
c r e a t i o n .
~ / \ |
here
now
bird song .
~ / \ |
field
bee
sunlight .
~ / \ |
thoughts
~ s p a c e d ~
even .
~ / \ |
p a c e
p e r f e c t i o n .
.
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Quite freeing for writers to think more clearly.
I wish I got to visit Telluride more often. I'm in Denver, but Telluride has been my favorite part of Colorado, though I love all the mountain towns. You captured what it's like up there so well. "be creation." I love that. That is how it feels.
seemed calming
Love the photo and the calm, measured quiet of the words. Another outstanding poem, Tony.
This was so serene and peaceful! So beautifully written! I loved it!
ahhhh {deeeeeep breath}! This is such a beautiful piece (peace), Tony! What a refreshing moment in time you created here. Your structure is always so much fun and adds so much to the experience of your work. I got the sense of walking through the grasses, then laying in them, and spiraling into connection with all of the elements. Totally awestruck by this wonderful experience you created with your words. Magical! Thank you for this.
Aw, this is gorgeous, Tony! It felt like such a refreshing breath and was actually just what I needed π₯Ή I found this part really, really beautiful: "s p a c e of mind heart ." I also really loved your fonts and structure here. Beautiful!
You captured the feeling of a stroll I took through the English countryside once really well! Took me back to University and sunny days :)