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Overweight Wife

Human psyche thinks relations are business deals

By Seema PatelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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The wife is overweight,

nothing wrong with that,

love is important,

loyalty too.

But we all know,

which way the world leans.

The man would have hurt,

or discarded her,

pursued affairs,

if not for the gains.

People want a good deal

from relationships,

as if they are businesses.

But he calls her “baby.”

You know the reason?

She’s the only daughter,

of wealthy parents,

with a big inheritance.

She has a job,

and earns decent.

So, he calls her “baby,”

though she is overweight.

So if you want,

to be treated right,

either be born,

to rich parents,

or, if not,

develop skills

to ensure self-respect.

otherwise,

if you’re overweight,

you may be treated,

like a doormats,

you have to face brickbats.

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About the Creator

Seema Patel

Hi, I am Seema. I have been writing on the internet for 15 years. I have contributed to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, and Amazon KDP.

I write about nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, and psychology.

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  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    Good job and I guess that is what the world is like now for various reasons. We all just need to accept the people around us for who we are not just our appearances.

  • Marie381Uk 6 months ago

    Wow this is really true every word🌻😊🌻

  • Caitlin Charlton6 months ago

    Oh my. This poem is nothing but the truth. It’s so sad that this is how people treat relationships, like a businesses. It’s depressing that we have to be born to rich parents, and rely on making something of ourselves by way of gaining skills in order to have a fighting chance. It’s always a great thing to write about this truth in our society, so for that, this was an outstanding piece. ‘you may be treated, like a doormats, you have to face brickbats.’ These three lines were my favourite 👌🏽♥️

  • So true. I read somewhere a few days ago that showed the statistics to a study that said that fat people are not treated as nicely as thin people

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