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out of control

Romantic poem.

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
out of control
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the touch of your

breath

the back of my

neck

leaves me a little

headspun

out of control

the smile on your

face

the lace on your

skin

leaves me a little

unwound

out of control

*

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Author's Notes: Romantic poem.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    I only ever say hubba hubba on love poems etc as what else is there really to say.. 😄haha .. I accidentally said hubba Bubba on one of Melissa’s pieces the other day which I suspect might hold another meaning. Actually NO, that is a bubblegum brand in Australia so we are all good! 😅

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    There's something very young about this, that kind of capacity to be swept away.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is romantic, and very lovely..... unless someone's getting strangled with the lace, then it's a whole other vibe. But then again. Hmmm. I'll shut up now. Bye.

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Whoa, spinning me around Paul!! 🩷

  • Kodah2 years ago

    Incredible ! 💌

  • Sandra Matos2 years ago

    This poem is lovely! It is short, but the point is made.

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