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Gravity compounds
Friction is ever stirring
Boom! A star is born.
Stars die and are born
The cosmic winds make planets
New elements form
A planet's frozen
Water pressurized beneath
New life starts to form
Orbiting a sun
Geothermal vents melt ice
Winds whip the surface
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This is so excellent.
Amazing, spectacular origin story! 😍❤️🔥 Makes me feel so small. Cosmic winds are crazy to think about. Haven’t seen them in anyone’s haiku yet — great job!