Optimism
Necessitate Through The Storm
Shattered
Like Pieces Of Glass
Laying On The Pavement...
Imperceptible Bruises,
Visible On My Heart,
But It Won't Stop beating...
My Mind Is Racing
But My Body Stands Soporific
I Put My Pride To The Side,
And Let My Ego Face My Fears...
Although I Am A Little Afraid,
I Still Trust My Journey.
Even While Hurting,
Something Tells Me, That I Can Take The Pain,
Just Like The Sand Takes InThe Rain...
I Know That This Is Tough,
But I Just Can't Give Up...
No One Told Me,
This Is For Me, But Undoubtedly,
I Will Succeed, This I Do Believe.
Even On My Bad Days
There Are Better Days Ahead...
I Can Only Imagine
What The Future Holds For Me...
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Reader insights
Outstanding
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Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (19)
Nice!! Relateable.πππ Congratulations on your top story!ππππ
nice and inspiring
This poem is raw heart whilst bleeding...cannot help but feel it. Relatable in spades. Why have so many of us been in this club? Congratulations on the top story!
βImperceptible bruises Visible on my heartβ Well if that doesnβt describe poetry Iβm not sure what does. Very handsomely done Good sir!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Excellent work. Love this line. 'But My Body Stands Soporific' Learned a new word today, soporific. A bonus on top of a relatable poem. Well done, congrats on the TS.
Always trust the journey. Congratulations on your top storyβ£
Very inspiring π₯°how are you my friend
I love this poem so much. Congratulations on a much deserved Top Story.
Yassss! Very inspiring, powerful, life-speaking, words! Love it!
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Ah, Lonzo, finding the strength to face each day, to rise and do it all again can see like a superhuman effort, but we do it because we have the will to survive. This is uplifting and inspirational. Blessings on the days now and those to come. Heartfelt poetry.
Just like all the rest of us with a way to keep us on our toes and to do what we need to do whatever we need to do. Good job.
So uplifting & flawlessly-exceuted! You did that! πͺπΎπ
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Beautiful Lonzo. I love the strength and optimism here!
This felt so hopeful and was beautifully written. Loved your poem! Happy to see you back here after such a long time. Hope you've been doing well Lonzo!