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Childish whimsy of
Popping ballon’s up above
Landing may be rough
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Comments (10)
Cleverly done… a balloon ride to miss😵💫.
I like how the first line of your haiku is like an introduction, I’m imagining us shooting a bow 🤣🤣🤣 the landing will be rough indeed 🤣🤣🤣 very lovely, playful haiku, well written and creative.
Yikes! Lol. Nice Sky-ku!
Good luck in the challenge!
Ouch!
Hahahahahahaha I can see myself doing that! Also, I think you misspelled balloon. Loved your Haiku!
Your last line caused me to imagine those balloons tearing around in loops and turns like child's balloon when popped! Hilarious Haiku, Jason!
lol ooh that's funny! 🎈
Hah!! That last line was unexpected and so brilliant Jason!!! 😅
Omg. Hahaha oops indeed!