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The stars sing above me,
Cold lights of eternity,
And here I am on this globe,
One small thought,
But a breath in stillness,
How can it be?
The vast depths beyond,
Places I shall never see,
And yet I am conscious,
Delighting in the moment,
This gift of life,
So rare so precious,
Is all I have to spend,
Beneath the singing heavens,
Rejoice with me.
About the Creator
Jamye Sharp
Oregon writer, trying to have some fun and improve my craft.
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Outstanding
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
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Niche topic & fresh perspectives




Comments (5)
This is incredible. It’s also very optimistic, which I appreciate.
Very beautiful 🤩
This is lovely, this creation mystery, so divine. Kudos on your win.
Congratulations for your third place win under Emerging Creators 🥳🎉🎉
Absolutely inspiring, I will rejoice with you, it’s a miracle to be alive witnessing all this beauty. ‘One small thought, But a breath in stillness, How can it be?‘ This was my favourite line. I like the way it flows and I like the elements of humility and gratitude. Very well done, you’re very good at writing poetry.