
A flash of black feathers against a stark grey sky
naive messenger
a solo omen of desolation clothed in obsidian elegance
call you raven or crow or magpie
I still know the purport you bring
drop no shiny bobbles on my doorstep
no trinkets of misdirection
I've learned the harsh lesson
of not picking up lost or discarded things
disguised as a gift
and calling them home
I hear your cackling
a constant reminder of my folly
having tried to turn a lover into
a friend
I might as well have tried twisting
lead into gold
silence into closure
~
Ha, you say,
Ha.
About the Creator
Sarah Lenn
Using writing as a way to capture snapshots of emotion on a screen whilst life happens. And life has thrown me some curve balls. Always striving to find a path through the chaos...
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Comments (5)
the entire poem literally funnels into those powerful last few lines... so well done
This is a very cool poem. Love it.
Awesome free verse!
This was brilliant! I loved it. Very well written!
I love everything about this free verse. I think I'd frame it -