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Oh, Good Lord

Some People's Kids - UGH

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Oh, Good Lord
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I’m impatient, get frustrated

seems this mood might be contagious

Back it up please, I can't face it

your expectations are outrageous

How you hold me to a standard

that you don't observe yourself

You insist on being pampered

your needs above EVERYone else

If I could, I'd smack your mother

but it's your dad you get that from

What she's put up with, makes me shudder

I'd love to kick him in the bum

But there's a point when you should stand up

be better than that piece of shit

Instead, you use him as your crutch

so you can get away with it

How I fell into your trap

I look back now and scold myself

I'm so far now, from all your crap

but I think it's time you got some help

You have a small boy learning lessons

how he'll turn out, is up to you

Please don't repeat your dad's transgressions

do better so that he can too

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Calvin London3 months ago

    Powerful but true words, Kelli. There must be so many families this can apply to.

  • Oh, oh, ohhhh, do I ever relate to this cycle of passive parenting. This poem should be pasted on school bulletin boards in the parent/teacher conference room. Poetry relieves a lot of angst. Get 'im Kelli, 😆

  • A. J. Schoenfeld3 months ago

    Great poem to which I'm sure many of us can relate. We all know that person who just can't seem to rise above the past. This poem screams, "Stop the cycle and give the next generation a fighting chance."

  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    What a great poem for a parent education class to introduce the course.

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