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Of Inadequacy

For Sky-ku Challenge

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Of Inadequacy
Photo by Christian Wiediger on Unsplash

"Don't look up," I said

"Why?" she asked, full of concern

"Sky's beauty mocks me"

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Susan Payton11 months ago

    Absolutely Charming!! Nicely Done!!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡♥️⚡

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    🎵 “When there are clouds in the sky, you'll get by If you smile through your fear and sorrow Smile and maybe tomorrow You'll see the sun come shining through for you If. You. Just. Smile.” 🎵 This was my piss weak attempt at trying to make you laugh! 😏😅

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Charming, clever, and compelling! Tall order for a haiku, but you nailed it!

  • Hehehehe this one a cute one. Loved it, Sir Paul!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    None of us can compete with a perfect sunset, Paul, like self-loathing the sky edition. But I adore its totally out of the box vibe that we all know and love you for!

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    Self-loathing is a familiar adversary. You captured its implications deftly herein, my liege!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh, I like this one too. Well done again.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Wow, this is sooooo good. It says so much

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Love this one for it quite humorous.

  • Katherine D. Grahamabout a year ago

    puts a smile on my face! love the poem

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