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Of Godafoss and Longing

Experimental poem.

By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Of Godafoss and Longing
Photo by Martin Brechtl on Unsplash

as the light gets brighter, I delight

(clearest blue skies, free from smog, electric and telecommunication masts, a dreamlike vision of what could have been, a different reality, an alternative illusion of grandeur)

settle in for a Spring of promise

(or unobstructed by a glorious urbanised cityscape where greenery is allowed to thrive)

a Spring of change and horizons

(Goðafoss- visions of natural beauty, the untapped creative potency of the world, the draping waters of Goðafoss, of River Skjálfandafljót)

old and new, open to change

even as it terrifies

and grapples at my

low-bar confidence

my sub-par insistence

that leads to

high-end reluctance

-

a life of substance

(not the tallest, deepest or most dangerous of its kind)

a life less than

(12 metres tall over 30 metres wide, stops my breath.)

anything but ordinary

(Oh dreams of its glory befalling my eyes. A vision of crystalised Hydrogen Oxide)

belongs to the brave

and the bold

(as the land of green vibrancy and gleaming liquid mirrors whispers and calls to me)

happenstance is not

existence

*

Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: Another experimental poem thing. Inspired, though not entirely, by Goðafoss.

Here are other things:

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • D.K. Shepard10 months ago

    Wow, to both the beautiful natural wonder and your wonderful experimental poem! Such sights do provoke grand and lofty ideas

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    A poem that once again will have people noticing their surroundings. Good job.

  • Laura Pruett10 months ago

    Interesting technique with the parenthetical statements

  • Beautiful. Thank you for sharing the picture.

  • John Cox10 months ago

    Awe is fleeting these dark days, but can still be found in the wild and untamed frontier. Thought provoking poetry, spectacular image. Loved your poem, Paul!

  • Caroline Craven10 months ago

    Wow - your words totally do justice to the picture…. And you’ve made me want to pack up a suitcase and go travelling. Great stuff Paul.

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    such a lovely tribute to a beautiful landmark <3

  • Suze Kay10 months ago

    I’ve been there! It’s stunning. Your poem sure captured the awe it inspires.

  • angela hepworth10 months ago

    God, this was beautiful. And I’d never heard about that waterfall, but it looks insane to see in real life, like magic.

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