as the light gets brighter, I delight
(clearest blue skies, free from smog, electric and telecommunication masts, a dreamlike vision of what could have been, a different reality, an alternative illusion of grandeur)
settle in for a Spring of promise
(or unobstructed by a glorious urbanised cityscape where greenery is allowed to thrive)
a Spring of change and horizons
(Goðafoss- visions of natural beauty, the untapped creative potency of the world, the draping waters of Goðafoss, of River Skjálfandafljót)
old and new, open to change
even as it terrifies
and grapples at my
low-bar confidence
my sub-par insistence
that leads to
high-end reluctance
-
a life of substance
(not the tallest, deepest or most dangerous of its kind)
a life less than
(12 metres tall over 30 metres wide, stops my breath.)
anything but ordinary
(Oh dreams of its glory befalling my eyes. A vision of crystalised Hydrogen Oxide)
belongs to the brave
and the bold
(as the land of green vibrancy and gleaming liquid mirrors whispers and calls to me)
happenstance is not
existence
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Another experimental poem thing. Inspired, though not entirely, by Goðafoss.
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (9)
Wow, to both the beautiful natural wonder and your wonderful experimental poem! Such sights do provoke grand and lofty ideas
A poem that once again will have people noticing their surroundings. Good job.
Interesting technique with the parenthetical statements
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing the picture.
Awe is fleeting these dark days, but can still be found in the wild and untamed frontier. Thought provoking poetry, spectacular image. Loved your poem, Paul!
Wow - your words totally do justice to the picture…. And you’ve made me want to pack up a suitcase and go travelling. Great stuff Paul.
such a lovely tribute to a beautiful landmark <3
I’ve been there! It’s stunning. Your poem sure captured the awe it inspires.
God, this was beautiful. And I’d never heard about that waterfall, but it looks insane to see in real life, like magic.