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Ode To The Cosmic Carousel

Journey Through The Celestial Symphony

By John Andres Castillo IIPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Ode To The Cosmic Carousel
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Upon the canvas of the cosmos, a carousel spins,

Celestial horses galloping, where the dance begins,

Planets and stars like jewels, they gleam and twirl,

In the ground carousel of the universe, a mesmerizing swirl.

A carousel of galaxies, a waltz of cosmic dust,

Timeless motion, a symphony of orbit they entrust.

Nebulas unfold like the finest silk attire,

As the carousel spins, igniting cosmic fire.

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Oh, cosmic carousel, your mysteries unfold,

Stories of creation and destruction, untold.

You carry us through the tapestry of might,

Guiding our dreams with your radiant light.

A carousel of wonder, a ride through space,

Where every spin unveils a new embrace.

We marvel at your elegance, your eternal grace,

Oh, cosmic carousel, a celestial masterpiece.

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Let us ride this carousel with hearts full of awe,

Gaze at the constellations, in wonder, we draw.

A dance of galaxies, a celestial reverie,

The cosmic carousel, a glimpse of eternity.

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Round and round we go, on this cosmic ride,

Through nebulas and supernovas, side by side,

We witness the birth of stars, their fiery birth,

And marvel at the wonders of the universe's girth.

Oh, cosmic carousel, you hold the key,

to the mysteries of the universe

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About the Creator

John Andres Castillo II

I am a writer, and my soul finds its voice in the art of poetry. With each carefully chosen word, I paint the canvas of emotions and thoughts, creating a symphony of feelings that resonate with hearts and minds alike.

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  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    Lovely writing. Felt like the cosmics really deserved this beautiful poem to match their beauty!

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