Ode to Simba, abecedarian sequence
My Zenith Feline

All the while it was
becoming more obvious my
cat was seeking attention,
dividing my brain into pieces of puzzles.
Eagerly seeking to please, this sassy
feline, my big seventeen-pound
galloping boy, grabbing my forearms but never
hurting me, never scratching me.
Indeed, he knew how to play.
Jauntily, yet intelligently, so smart,
keeping his claws within his paws.
Leaping from behind the door to
make me chase him.
Not letting me catch up,
only outrunning and maneuvering.
Playing hide and seek, his personal
quirky game, showing off his
rowdy
speed and slides
toward me, or
under a table.
Vexed not in the least,
we played and laughed, and I wished I could
xerox him, keep him with me forever.
Yearly, no daily, I think of him - my
zenith arc to decades of human-feline companions.
** Simba came to us from an abused situation, already named Simba. He had to have 3 pins inserted into his broken paw. Once he understood we loved him, he gentled. I have never had a cat who played but didn't accidentally claw, and he never hooked me, even by accident. He KNEW! He was the smartest cat I've ever been with. The only cat with a profound sense of humor. He gentled all our visitors, especially people who disliked cats. He is missed deeply but never forgotten. He had a best friend we adopted at the same time, Miles, a brown tabby. They were best friends. When Miles died, Simba looked for him throughout the house every day FOR A YEAR, howling in dismay and grief. It was heartbreaking.
Vocal Challenge: a·be·ce·dar·i·an - arranged alphabetically.
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Andrea Corwin
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Comments (6)
Awwww. Such a great poem that you forget you're using certain letters for the challenge! Anyone who's owned a cat will understand what you are saying, and "dividing my brain into pieces of puzzles." is a fantastic line.
Love love love this
It broke my heart to read that Simba looked for Miles for a year 😭😭😭 Animals have so much of love, sometimes even more than humans. Loved your poem!
Heartbreaking but such is life at times.
NICE
VERY GOOD