Ode to intellectual beauty
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a billowing ballad, expanding
The waves of endless tears
Inside a grieving nephesh, the throat that is parched without the fresh water of your
Philosophical question,
It sounds like a rain after a long flood
Pitter-pattering against the sea.
Your heart rate climbs like a scuttling beetle, luminous and green,
Higher and higher
As it reaches your vocals,
And your words are not sounds I am familiar with
Like a new language
A new song
Descriptions of a different type of expression
From the breath of the Living God,
It sounds and feels like an everlasting breath
You placed into my very heart,
Spiritual sanctuary,
Locked in a fire that never dies
Never burns
A definition of the symbolic, the fact, the fiction, the dream, the story of our lives as
We find ourselves in a dizzy daylight
Vision,
Where the philosophy of your answer
Fills the void with a bursting ripe, healing
Command of consciousness
Rising above
Without magniloquent identity
Only subtle, intense intelligence in a beautiful pattern,
Quenching my parched soul deeper, unlike any other.
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Comments (8)
I loved this ❤️
amazing
Wow. This is amazing, Mellissa. Well done.
Omg, 🫶🏾💯You Totally Rocked this Piece ❤️🎊✍️😊📝
Stunning! Every sentence felt like an event to enjoy! Nicely Done!
Wow. Beautifully written and nuanced. You filled me up.💙Anneliese
Omgggg, this was so deep and I truly love your choice of words! So beautiful!
What a profound & remarkable expression of nephesh, nurtured within the care of another.