noticing
the tiny twitches of your face
/ how i'm drawn into your mind
the sweet shape of your fingernails
/ how i want them to be mine
i could draw you from memory
oh how you are a song to me
i notice
/everything you do
my lovely valentine
About the Creator
Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH6 days ago in Critique
Comments (1)
Your poem beautifully captures the delicate and intimate observations of love.