Observations on a Train
An experimental poem
Note: I wrote this on my phone whilst on the train; everything I mention here is actually true.
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The picture of a train through
the mountains and hills often
conjures a dreamy thought.
Images of delight and splendour
ignite the mind with the beauty of
England's idyllic scenery:
the famous, rolling countrysides.
But most on this train journey I hear,
blasting music from a speaker
without headphones or consideration for
a sleeping toddler - who wakes crying.
The faux-drunk conversations of
the NEETs of Gen-Z in the midday heat
in which a sweat-stenched millennial man has
seated himself spread-legged and creepily
next to a
scared
female
teenager.
Hiding behind her hooded jacket,
she's unhappy and anxious at the prospect that he
might open his mouth and speech directed
at her,
might exit it.
But, his haircut signals that he is wearing
wireless headphones made by a company
you haven't heard of.
A relieved sigh escapes someone's mouth -
nobody knows why.
And the windows won't open,
the doors squeak with noise,
the birds can't be heard singing
and an energy drink has managed to calm
my migraine. Sunshine
and it's still dull,
dreary and dystopian.
Yet,
I cannot help but feeling
perhaps
the railway excellency is dying
like a charm in a sea of cramped faces
on a cheap bracelet made of rusty metal.
And we all glow by phone-light.
Life is a paid subscription
where people are so distracted they don't notice
the slow rumble of the next stop,
the fear and the trembling
of when you might have to
move
and
merge.
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Thanks for reading. Please remember that the 'Day in the Life' poetry challenge by me, ends on the 31st of May!
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Comments (3)
This was such an intricate piece of reality youβve penned here! You capture the hopelessness of human society that itβs so easy to feel when surrounded by it sometimes, whether through moral or emotional or technological decay. Amazing work as always!
This is very impressive, AK! And yes, I'm old: what is NEET? Sounds like they might have to fumigate the train.
You say you cannot write poetry, but you are amazing at writing it. This was beautifully written.