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Oblivion

Sweet Release

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

The clouds are rushing by so quickly, like they’ve got somewhere to be

Everybody’s always pushing, taking little parts for free

She holds on to her secrets, like they're trinkets made of gold

Locking her shame, inside the things, that keeps her heart controlled

She wears fear, like an accessory, so you can't see it in her eyes

Overloaded sensories, to mask the tell in its surprise

The smile that she offers you, veils the truth she hides away

If you're looking for the proof, listen to what she doesn't say

Looking for the freedom that once joined her on her journey

Oblivious this day would come, now nags at her, without mercy

She prays for wings to fly away and the will to find release

Jumping headfirst through the clouds, following the birds, to find her peace

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Calvin Londonabout a year ago

    Another get creation you had me at: The clouds are rushing by so quickly, like they’ve got somewhere to be Everybody’s always pushing, taking little parts for free. A very apt description of the clouds, and as usual, your rhyming is second to none. Loved it

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Great job, as usual, loved it!!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This is light as a bird on the wing and as freighted with emotion as really bad news. And I have no idea how you managed to pull such a thing off. My hat’s off to you on this one, Kelli!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    I think at one time or another we all feel like this sometimes.

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Well written. I really felt this!

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Beautifully written, love the metaphors.🙏

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is excellent. That first line really drew me in, and it just got better. Well done. Also, not at all the same, but I'm amused that we both wrote a poem with the same title, within hours of each other. Lol

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