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Insensate Paralyses

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Nikola Tomašić on Unsplash

Isolated sun rays shifting from warm to cool delights

thinly layered ice forms on the blades of grass at night

Leaves hang, barely clinging, shades of colors start to fade

imprints of illusions and what will be, begin to braid

Invigorating footsteps, uncover the crisp film, blanketed

another day of sun, melting the veiled coating, dusted with

Air escapes the lungs, creating clouds of condensation

all nature filmed in white, exceeding my grandest imagination

Intense wintry scenes collect, as goosebumps gather in the frore

brisk and nipping chills bite and nibble at your pores

Tiny hints of fall peek through the frosted breath of winter's kiss

what wondering could eyes imagine, during an idleness like this

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • A. J. Schoenfeld4 months ago

    This was such as chilling description of crisp autumn mornings hinting at the promise of approaching winter. There were so many perfect and stunning descriptions in this poem. I loved it beginning to end.

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    Great job and thanks for the memories of a frosty morning. Love those mornings and even tracing and melting it on the windows.

  • Sooo nice!!

  • Sam Spinelli4 months ago

    This is beautiful. Really gets at the sense of magic one can find in the changing seasons

  • Carol Ann Townend4 months ago

    How beautiful. This was delightful to read. It certainly makes me look forward to those cold days and nights.

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