It comes—if its warning is unheard.
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The wind's breath chills
Bringing whispers too cold to remain.
A sliver of light within frosty dark.
Silence in the trees—no chirping.
Black darkness moves—against stillness.
A shiver courses through my chest.
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It comes—
Every November,
Lingering in the mind and soul,
A call to the self—
Creeping in to stay—
If not heeded.
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Leaves that drifted,
Silhouettes that moved.
A dance to shape the soul
Its steps foretold—
For me.
For others.
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A ghost that haunts
Every November
Shadows trail its form
Leaves call frosty names—
If left unheard—ours.
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What do you think the ghost is? Do share!
For Mikeydred's November Challenge
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (4)
The way you build tension through cold imagery and subtle movement gives the piece a cinematic quality. Each line feels like a moment suspended between silence and revelation.
This is very beautiful, Michelle.
Such an eerie, elegant piece. Just beautiful.
Oooo, this was a little creepy. Loved it!