Autumn's Apology
Every ending promises a return.
Every ending promises a return--Nature's cycle.
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Forgive me for the wind that strips you bare;
I am sorry for the cold and near-frost's glare;
For momentous gusts that cause your leaves to fall;
For the joy of kindling your red flare.
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I confess, I cannot stay, I must take what once bloomed;
Write soulful notes on fallen leaves, to a sad, lost tune;
I never meant to curb your laugh, just put it to sleep
Never in my hands to take, or in my arms to keep.
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My Earth, dear, in my hands I take what does endure
To return to you in time, for that, you must be sure;
Now lanterns glow and baskets fill below the light of dusk
For such signs of life renewed, your faith in life, a must.
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But now you know, that life goes round, back where it all begins;
That I donβt take, I do return, in pure kind, and not at whim
Your rich soil, it does recall, every sadness sown
But i return, in joyous form, all your trees now grown.
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I leave for you, my contrite appeal, and a promise to return
A final leaf, small but green, proof that things will turn
I say goodbye, with humbled heart, and quiet, calm repose;
Then white youβll don, and then take off, and wear the green that flows.
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Original poem by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental
How do you cope with cycles that are without your control? Do share in the comments.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (29)
A poem that evokes many emotions. It makes me look back on my life and compare my own feelings with yours. Very beautiful. π
Autumn is my favourite season. This is so beautiful.
What a beautiful poem, why I only saw this now I don't know but I'm glad I did!
What a stunning piece, this piece really spoke to me thank you. Love your work.
This is very beautiful, Michelle! π The video is very nice, too!
Love the imagery! "...a wear the green that flows." Beautiful! π
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! ππππππ
Well-wrought, Michelle, and well-deserved kudos! To cope with the cycles of life we can only put our best foot forward, one step at a time.
Congratulations on your top story!πππ
This is a great read!
Congratulations on a well deserved Top Story. It spoke to me because I love nature; and the seasons speak to me, as obviously they do you, so beautifully expressed here!!
Beautiful work, Michelle! "Every ending promises a return," will stick with me. Congratulations on your top story and best of luck to you in the challenge! π
Wow! This is the first one of that challenge I read. A great example to lead by. Congrats, Michelle!
This is gorgeously written. Excellent piece. For me, itβs just a good deal of therapy lol. π
Congrats on top story!
I don't cope lol to answer your question. πBut poems like this help. This was absolutely beautiful, Michelle. Loved it. The descriptions were exquisite and the cadence had a bit of magic to it. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story!
Wonderful well done on Top Story β¦οΈβ¦οΈβ¦οΈ
Such a lovely and descriptive poem, Michelle. Congratulations on the Top Story - it is much deserved!
Very beautiful! Love the flow of it. Congratulations on top story.
This was so beautiful and deep. Congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Beautiful and congrats on top story!
This is gorgeous. I suffer from SAD. I am ok with Summer, but Winter and Autumn make me feel really down. I cope by looking for things that delight me in the season, flowing autumn leaves, acorns, snow patterns, a shimmer of light through a raindrop, and poems such as yours.
This is absolutely beautiful. I love the flow and emotions. It's gorgeous!
always hope
This is absolutely marvelous, Michelle; a wonderful elegy for what's lost each year, but filled with the seeds of hope for things to be reborn. Simply magical work, beautifully worded in every stanza. :)