November Nostalgia
For the Unofficial November Rain Challenge
By Dana CrandellPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Image by mateya from Pixabay
In the grand scheme of things,
I love all that November brings.
Feasts of color for my eyes,
Soft rains falling from soft skies
And the chance, again to see
Through the eyes of younger me.
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Written for the Unofficial November Rain Challenge, by Mother Combs:
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (16)
Beautifully done!
Transitioning from a grandness of November to soft rains from soft skies, brings that last line with an emotional grace. Absolutely beautifully done, Dana.
Always blown away by your effortless rhymes Dana! Excellent job in this mini piece!!
Such a wonderful and peaceful poem! Totally tapping in to that child like wonder over here! Loved this, Dana! ✨🫶🏼✨
Short and very sweet. Many lovely turns of phrase per square inch in this beautiful little poem.💙Anneliese
Oh my god🥺. This tugged at my heartstrings. <3 So cute and wholesome. And the picture makes it all the more adorable.
Through the eyes of younger me. I think everyone would love that! Your poem was so beautiful!
Me too!
That was lovely. Great job on the prompt.
💚📝👍
So sweet <3
Oh, that one was so lovely and gentle.
This truly is nostalgic and the rhyme and meter are perfect! Beautiful!! 🥰
Every time the leaves change or the first snow falls, I’m suddenly six years old again watching with wide, wondering eyes Super relatable Dana :) well done!
Lovely!! Just beautiful
The nostalgia in that last line is srunning! Loved this 🤍