How I feel I can't explain
If feels like an endless pain
I tried so hard but in vain
My life, stagnant like water, no loss no gain
No motivation, nothing I want to do
Like black and white films, no colors, no hue
My mind confused, what's happening no hint no clue
lost in the void, seeking a spark anew
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Very relatable feeling and definitely not a good place to stay. But sometimes it's just hard to find your way through. Lovely and expressive poetry!
My life, stagnant like water, no loss no gain- love this line!
Nothing; yet beautiful 💖 There are times in life when it feels like nothing—no wars or stars. And it's okay. That's what defines us humans: the imperfections of time and life. Still, the last spark fired a flare for hope and light...
Thank you for sharing something so heartfelt and deeply emotional.
Been here before. Very relatable feeling. You describe it so well with the similes. Excellent poetry writing.
"Ohh! It evokes a sense of emptiness, endless pain, and the search for existence. But in the end, the search for a spark, it's amazing. Brilliant. ✨🤟