Notebooks 📝
Couldn’t she see I had to keep my head down to protect myself?
Notebooks 📝
In these many, many notebooks
He’d compulsively write,
Every thought,
Everything to remember,
To structure his speeding train of thoughts,
Using lists to get through each day,
And obsessively chronicling every hurtful or forgotten memory,
To work a way towards freedom..
There were copious positive affirmations, CBT notes to read aloud,
And occasionally a snippet of creative writing.
Keep your head down so
You don’t have to deal with what is right
In front of you..
***
Then she took my book - my inner world,
Just to see my reaction..
“Can I have my book back now please?”
Can you believe she had the audacity?
I sure didn’t.
Then, she kept hold of it on the other side of the table and
Smiled -
Like this was some sort of OCD/response prevention game!
That I was not in the mood for.
Couldn’t she see I had to keep my damn head down down
Down,
To protect myself!?
📓
***
If you would like to read another short free verse about the importance 😅of not touching someone’s books you can do so below. The one above is obviously about me, “Bag of Books” is based on someone else.
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan6 days ago in Beat
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Always like to see mental health discussed in literature. Well done!
Well call me a flaming arsehole as I thought I had commented and liked this already. Totally resonate with this, although it's my computer that is most precious to me and my WIP folder lol. Recently, though, I've taken to writing in a notebook too...if you want to call it "writing" it's like a GP's handwriting. Congrats on Top Story
The AUDACITY! Very well written.
Oh, this was so powerful, Grz! I feel like I've had some similar struggles, through they manifested a little differently than this. However, writing is definitely a way I've used to try to "free" myself. Wonderful expression!
I felt this one, Grz. I had a similar experience as a child. You described that violation so perfectly here. The memory is emblazoned in my mind. Great expression of thought and emotion, and congrats on top story!! 💫💞
Awesome poem. Congratulations on your top story. 🎉🎉🎉
So much said in so few words and lines. If Better Help and similar mental health platforms had a blog, this would be a piece that would resonante with many. Congratulations on Top Story!
I feel you on this one! Wonderful work!
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Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Beautifully written, Congratulations❤
i truly understand what it means to "keep you head down to protect yourself. "
Excellent poem and well deserved to see it on Vocal's front page
Beautifully writtten, we need 'notebooks' for self-preservation I think. Poignant and powerful, and resonated hard. Congratulations of a wonderful Top Story! 🤍
Congratulations 🥳
I think she was flirting with you 😊but toying with your emotions, not in a good way. Great poem, Grz
Congratulations ❤️
Congrats on the stop story! This gave me some second hand panic. XD
The ironic part of this poem is that while I have no problem sharing my writings with friends, I feel very awkward sharing them with relatives, including my husband. Is that weird?
So you don't have to deal with what is right In front of you. Ouch. This prickled. ❤ Congratulations!
Wonderful. Congrats on the TS.
Congratulations on Top Story!! I liked the overall feel of this piece!
Hearted earlier!!! Congratulations on Top Story!°❤️❤️💕
Oh you shattered my heart. Truly, what a wonder you presented in such a devastating fashion. Bravo
This was good! I liked how it flowed. Did not expect that turn of events in the second part. Like a silent tempest. But hey, look up, eh?