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Not Just any Sunrise

any lovin is good lovin...

By BrenPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
Dawn yesterday, Melbourne Australia

i fell in love with

i

i fell

i fell in

i fell in love

with the most beautiful

completely mental nymphomaniac ever

her name was Dawn

she was a sunrise

in the middle of the night

she was a prize

she was the fight

she was a darkness

that fought the light

she liked KFC chips

and cooking chocolate buttons

she was out to lunch

she made me senseless

she made me slobber

little Bondi blonde surfer chick

from Connells Point in Sydney

i got so lost in her

i

i got

i got so

i got so lost

she stabbed me in the heart

a hundred thousand times

every time she fucked my mates

and other people i didn’t know

i love you she told me

i only fucked them

i didn’t let them kiss me

couldn’t help myself she said

symptoms of the condition

i let other people touch me she said

but you’re the only one who feels me

i was so in love with this crazy fucking woman

i

i was

i was so

i was so in

i was so in love

i was so in love it still makes my heart race

i was so in love i still see her pixie face

i was so in love all my brains were in my arse

i was so in love i would have invaded Poland had she asked

i was so in love with her i wanted to believe

i was so in love and that was why i had to leave

i

i was

i was so

i was so sad

i was so sad for a long and lonely time

i reckon if you ripped open my chest

ripped it wide open today

got past all the blood

the yucky visceral shit

you will find Dawn

close to my aching heart

and not to far from the possible root

of my jealousy issue nerve

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Andrew C McDonald8 months ago

    Wow. What a heart wrenching tale. Send this to all the guys saying they want to date a nymphomaniac. Fantastic job Brenton.

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