Photo by Olga Thelavart on Unsplash
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I am a man
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forty-five years old.
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About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!
Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!


Comments (8)
I think you know that I get this on so many levels.
Dude, can you give me Ruth’s email so I can talk to her and we can have inclusive conversations. I feel that you and I have a real connection, and I want Ruth to be a part of it so that everyone may benefit and become their best self.
Ahh so only a few years difference between us. I too am lost in noise
Dude, read my comment thread in this one and tell me I’m not a master of subversion: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/does-the-vocal-team-value-its-creators%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I left a comment on the Barbie villanelle with my suggestions. Hope I don’t come across as pedantic, even though I am.
This was a very Paul poem, lots of white space, minimal words, cryptic message. First, it felt like a mantra to slow down, breathe, accept, let go. And then I watched the seizure inducing video, for the 10 seconds I could handle it, and now the poem feels like desperation to find a way to slow down, breathe, accept, let go but you just can't escape the constant noise. Like laying in bed at night listening to the constant ringing in your ears while you try to turn off your brain and just can't fall asleep.
There's so much noise, even in the quiet, no matter what age we are. So many distractions, so loud at times. On a side note, I seriously thought y'all were in your 30's lol
I get it. I was once 45 standing in the noise. However, that was during the first Trump disadministration, and he was the 45th president when I was 45, so I was 44 and 12 months, just to disassociate.