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No more sky

A haiku

By Sam SpinelliPublished about a year ago 1 min read
No more sky
Photo by Gadiel Lazcano on Unsplash

where has the sky gone?

i’ve looked down so long, my eyes…

are stuck in the dirt

Haikusad poetry

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Sam Spinelli

Trying to make human art the best I can, never Ai!

Help me write better! Critical feedback is welcome :)

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  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    Blew me away, very original. Stirring the emotions and drawing relatable connections. I especially love the metaphor of the eyes stuck in the dirt.

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Wow, I subscribed you because of your amazing poetry writing. Great 😃

  • Taimur Kazmiabout a year ago

    Hauntingly relatable—sometimes we forget the sky is even there.

  • Reileyabout a year ago

    What a different and more somber take on the challenge. Loved it!

  • R. B. Boothabout a year ago

    Bro... fantastic.

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