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Will the clouds roll on
in the long morrow, when We
are all forgotten?
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Sam Spinelli
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Great job
This one hits me hard, I thought I was safe when I read the first line, but then I read the last line and realised that our time here is fleeting. The clouds will still roll on in the long morrow. I love the sound of that ‘long morrow’ maybe it’s the o’s.
What a beautifully reflective question! It evokes a sense of timelessness and contemplation about our existence and the world beyond us. It's a poignant reminder of the transient nature of life and the enduring presence of nature.