
A dark poem out of nowhere. I am doing fine.
Lost in the dark,
falling from the sky.
Eating my words,
and failing to try.
I can't find a heartbeat,
and my skin is cold.
Here my story ends,
much left untold.
I slipped below the tide,
after splashing through the waves.
Sinking to the bottom,
I got pushed through the caves.
My cold body settles,
and my soul is released.
I experience no more,
for I am deceased.
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About the Creator
Colt Henderson
I usually write horror.
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This was awesome!