It was a really good effort,
and, to a degree,
it was successful:
I did fall back into that abyss
when you pushed me.
Last time, you threw me in it,
and I fell all the way to the bottom,
bones shattered on impact.
Not this time. I caught myself
on a ridge about halfway down
and saw all of the rage
I had to leave behind
because I was too weak
to carry it when I climbed out
last time.
It’s a terrible thing
with ferocious claws
and a beak that could snap you
like a twig. It thrives
on darkness and grew
in that empty well
and in me,
flew up to me,
cramping its wingspan
in this narrow pit so I
could climb on, pinning
my knees under its wings
to fly out of your abyss
on its back, and now

we’re hunting you.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.
I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.
MA English literature, College of Charleston
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Comments (3)
Gosh the Abyss analogy is making him sound really bad. And he is a really bad person. But the things you went through... Catching yourself on a ridge. Love how intense and scenic this got. Hopeful too. Love seeing your strength and hope blooming here. 'When you climbed out' I started getting goosebumps at this bit. It really ties everything together. 'We're hunting you.' this gave me the biggest smile I've had all day. Around a topic like this. It's amazing how creative we can get at using metaphors when pain becomes the driving force. I am very impressed with this one 🤗 ❤️ 🖤
beautiful
Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thankyou for sharing xx