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Nice Try

Twice burned

By Harper LewisPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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It was a really good effort,

and, to a degree,

it was successful:

I did fall back into that abyss

when you pushed me.

Last time, you threw me in it,

and I fell all the way to the bottom,

bones shattered on impact.

Not this time. I caught myself

on a ridge about halfway down

and saw all of the rage

I had to leave behind

because I was too weak

to carry it when I climbed out

last time.

It’s a terrible thing

with ferocious claws

and a beak that could snap you

like a twig. It thrives

on darkness and grew

in that empty well

and in me,

flew up to me,

cramping its wingspan

in this narrow pit so I

could climb on, pinning

my knees under its wings

to fly out of your abyss

on its back, and now

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we’re hunting you.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    Gosh the Abyss analogy is making him sound really bad. And he is a really bad person. But the things you went through... Catching yourself on a ridge. Love how intense and scenic this got. Hopeful too. Love seeing your strength and hope blooming here. 'When you climbed out' I started getting goosebumps at this bit. It really ties everything together. 'We're hunting you.' this gave me the biggest smile I've had all day. Around a topic like this. It's amazing how creative we can get at using metaphors when pain becomes the driving force. I am very impressed with this one 🤗 ❤️ 🖤

  • beautiful

  • Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thankyou for sharing xx

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