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New Original Song

What should I name this song?

By Rene PetersPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
New Original Song
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I miss having you around.

You helped me during the times I frowned.

Near you, I felt sound.

You always helped when I found

I'm feeling depressed,

in a constant state of unrest.

It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.

No matter how long you've been gone,

I'll never reach the dawn.

I want you to know

that I'll never let you go.

I miss having you here.

I often struggle to hold back tears.

I felt at the top of someone's tier.

You never got mad to hear

I'm feeling depressed,

in a constant state of unrest.

It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.

No matter how long you've been gone,

I'll never reach the dawn.

I want you to know

that I'll never let you go.

With you, I never felt alone.

Your house was my second home.

I cried as you turned to skin and bone.

Being with you was always a safe zone.

I'm feeling depressed,

in a constant state of unrest.

It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.

No matter how long you've been gone,

I'll never reach the dawn.

I want you to know

that I'll never let you go.

I'm feeling depressed,

in a constant state of unrest.

It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.

No matter how long you've been gone,

I'll never reach the dawn.

I want you to know

that I'll never let you go.

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These are the lyrics and setup that I have. I don't have notes or instrumentals for it yet. I'd appreciate suggestions for names and also opinions on what I have so far.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Rene Peters

I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 3 years ago

    Lovely words

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