I miss having you around.
You helped me during the times I frowned.
Near you, I felt sound.
You always helped when I found
I'm feeling depressed,
in a constant state of unrest.
It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.
No matter how long you've been gone,
I'll never reach the dawn.
I want you to know
that I'll never let you go.
I miss having you here.
I often struggle to hold back tears.
I felt at the top of someone's tier.
You never got mad to hear
I'm feeling depressed,
in a constant state of unrest.
It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.
No matter how long you've been gone,
I'll never reach the dawn.
I want you to know
that I'll never let you go.
With you, I never felt alone.
Your house was my second home.
I cried as you turned to skin and bone.
Being with you was always a safe zone.
I'm feeling depressed,
in a constant state of unrest.
It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.
No matter how long you've been gone,
I'll never reach the dawn.
I want you to know
that I'll never let you go.
I'm feeling depressed,
in a constant state of unrest.
It's been almost five years since you physically disappeared.
No matter how long you've been gone,
I'll never reach the dawn.
I want you to know
that I'll never let you go.
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These are the lyrics and setup that I have. I don't have notes or instrumentals for it yet. I'd appreciate suggestions for names and also opinions on what I have so far.
About the Creator
Rene Peters
I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (1)
Lovely words