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Thoughts

A Poem

By Rene PetersPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Thoughts
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The timing ticks,

tearfully tearing the twigs.

They're tangled together,

twisted, trying to transform.

They try to transfigure them.

They're the trivial thoughts

that try to test their thinking.

The twigs triumph the thoughts

that they treasured then.

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About the Creator

Rene Peters

I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.

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  • Judey Kalchik 3 years ago

    Such a masterful control of this poem's format. Well done!

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