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Neurotic

how much of our lives do we spend pretending we’re okay when we aren’t? Allgood’s “Train Song” is the track.

By Harper LewisPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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The trick is to indulge your neuroses

just enough, not so much that

you become psychotic, nor so little

that you’re always performing

without anyone knowing

they’re your audience,

getting furious, rage boiling

through your veins—because no one sees

what all of the pretense hides.

They don’t even care, didn’t buy tickets

to your show, and they damn sure

don’t want an encore.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Milan Milic3 months ago

    Beautifully crafted — it captures that fine line between self-awareness and self-destruction with biting clarity.

  • Edward Swafford3 months ago

    Narcissism has its limits, for sure. Brill, snappy poem!

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    Such a sharp and relatable piece. I love how you balance dark humour with emotional honesty.

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