Diffused dendrites dally
Infused in intrusions and inattention
Scattered synapses fire in sync like a sinking ship in
Troubled waters, where tyrants commit treason. Mutiny on the mast of the mind.
Rudders redress, shudder to a stop.
Attempts to amend,
Commended cortex, rewarded for repeating the same cycles.
Inside, chained to the familiar footsteps
Of well-trodden roads.
Neurons kneel in submission, slave to novelty, the frivolity of the frenzied brain.
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E.K. Daniels
Writer, watercolorist, and regular at the restaurant at the end of the universe. Twitter @inkladen
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Great word choice and excellent flow, thanks for sharing!!
Fabulous!!! Loved it❤️❤️💕