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Too Sweet

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Disposable emotions

under misty clouds of gray

Strawberry shaped corrosion

as I appear, dark as the lake

Smelling like distant smoke

from an imaginary fire

trying not to choke

as I sabotage the pyre

My memory on cassette

with a voice that cuts like glass

Though I try, I cannot forget

can't seem to let the moment pass

So, I cast them to the wind

or melt them bit by bit to ash

Those disposable emotions

I despise now that we're through

scattered in slow motion

those sweet memories of you

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Poppy 2 years ago

    You wove the prompt words so wonderfully into this. The flow reads so effortlessly and each line is packed full of meaning. Well done!

  • Ah, those disposable emotions that simply won't dispose. They can drive a person absolutely bonkers.

  • This was so poignant, emotional ans relatable. Loved your poem!

  • Well done! Love the rhythm & rhythm too… ‘Those disposable emotions I despise now that we're through scattered in slow motion those sweet the memories of you‘

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Beautiful piece, once again.

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