Nature's Daughter
Ekphrastic Challenge April 2025
This poem was written in response to the Rattle® Poetry Ekphrastic Challenge for April 2025 and was ultimately not selected. You can find more information here.
https://www.rattle.com/ekphrastic/
Nature’s Daughter
My heart’s true love is forever for a girl
Whose only love, is the natural world
Bound to the bosom of Nature, her mother
The love that she has can’t be given to another
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Her touch is gentle and her soul is kind
Her laughter bubbles and sharp is her mind
The warmth of her smile is a kiss from the sun
And when she smiles at me, my soul comes undone
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The branches of the willow sway long as hair
But to her locks in the wind, they could not compare
The eyes of the owl are large and bright
But her eyes hold the moon and all of starlight
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A meadow full of songbirds, with their melodies sweet
But the sound of her voice sweeps me off my feet
An oak in its majesty, she stands with grace
With delicate skin, soft as Queen-Anne’s Lace
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Just to hold her hand, how happy I’d be
I’d give everything I had if she’d marry me
So I’ll petition the mountains for permission of her hand
I’d even dig the diamond myself from the dirt of the land
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But an old worn-out bachelor, forever single I’ll be
For the one that I love will never love me
So I pray to the Lord that my body he takes
Like he fashioned Adam, my flesh he remakes
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To a deer in the forest, a dragonfly on the wing
A trout in the river or a bullfrog that sings
Reborn with feathers or as a yellow honeybee
Then maybe my love will finally love me
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About the Creator
Rae Fairchild (MRB)
I love to write; putting pen to paper fills my heart and calms my soul!
Rae Fairchild is my pen name. (Because why not? Pseudonyms are cool!)
I do publish elsewhere under my real name, M.R.B.
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Comments (2)
Wow! I love the beautiful imagery! The last line~sad and sweet, but oh so true! Loved it😺
I love this poem. I love the way it expresses forbidden love and the lighthearted emotion that comes with it. You are a very good poet.