Mysterious Myths of Moisture Exchange
And Shrouded Condensation
Your kiss
is pleasure full-moon deep
gentle insistence
that permeates sleep…
cycles and seasons
supplications and reasons
while connection bonds ion-locked lips
heat-seeking tongue
with sweet-cheeking hips
your brilliance enrapt
the secrets you know
this ecstasy exceeds
and you’re not letting go
Tenderness given
tenderness taken
silence unnecessary
with moans unforsaken
Deliciousness suits resonant fruits
with hearts this entwined
no one draws lines
just touch over touch
drips intoxicant wines
More than need more than leisure
More than thirst more than treasure
A raptured freedom blazes and sets spirits alight
A rich union forges then burrows hid from sight
All-consuming fervor contemplates sweetness overnight
Because your kiss
is celestial pleasure full-moon deep
gentle insistence that permeates sleep
since natural is
as natural does
purity birthed
makes joy itself weep
desire to satisfaction
sealed forever shall I keep
Kind thanks to you for taking the time to read my poem!
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Comments (14)
Brilliant Danni! How you’ve managed to exude such passion, without a single ‘naughty’ word, is impressive. 🥰
I've tempted to write an eloquent comment but all I have is WOW. This is amazing.
Beautifully sensual. This is hot! Well done, girl.
So sensual.
Wow, Kayleigh was right. This is like reading an orgasm ❤️
Great poem!
This is an amazing piece! Wow!!!!
I pray this is not taken as an inappropriate comment…and rather with the purest of sincerity with which I write it. My entire body just orgasmed reading this out loud. I have never, ever read poetry that has connected with my entire being like that. All the way through this you had my mind connected to the memory of a person…. And this perfectly encapsulates what I felt with him…. Thank you thank you thank you for infusing me with this incredible feeling again through your words. I am going to save this, because I love it so. Did I say thank you?! 🥰 THANK YOU! 🙏❤️✨
Dani, this was passionate and emotional. I loved your word choices and the feel of the poem as I read aloud! Great work!
Such heavenly bliss, the delights of that first kiss. (Those that follow aren't bad, either.)
Snap, snap, snap! I would read this poem all day long!
Oh this was just so wonderful and lovely! I loved it so much!
Moving magnificent and loved it!!!♥️♥️💕
So sensually beautiful , great words