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My Whole World Turned Grey

You betrayed me, my life is a barren land of grey Art copy rights to George’s Girl 2026

By Marie381Uk Published about 2 hours ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2026

My Whole world Turned Grey

you betrayed me, cold words fell.

Cold words fell, and light withdrew.

I stand alone in frozen air.

Nothing ever feels true.

No shadow moves, no breath escapes.

The walls reflect my hollow stare.

Your voice still rings but means no more.

I taste emptiness everywhere.

Days blur onward without end.

Time is a scar beneath my skin.

I trace the cracks where trust once lived.

I feel the loss begin.

I eat in silence, swallow shards.

I sleep in fragments of despair.

Night offers no reprieve.

Only echoes of your stare.

Your world shines bright without a pause.

Mine stiffens in your absence.

Life’s colors fade to ash and bone.

Hope fractures at my hands.

No tears fall—the frost contains them.

No plea escapes my frozen throat.

My heart’s a vault of broken glass.

Too cold to even hope.

You breathe free, unfettered still.

Your dreams ascend while mine decay.

The distance grows with every dawn.

My soul in cold array.

Nothing unfreezes here.

Nothing ever will.

Your betrayal etched in grey,

I linger forever standing still.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Tiffany Gordonabout 2 hours ago

    Magnificent work Marie!

  • Rohitha Lanka10 months ago

    Fascinating poem and well written, wish you good luck

  • Sera10 months ago

    Beautiful words written

  • Sid Aaron Hirji10 months ago

    my dad passed away this morning and these words could not be truer

  • Ellie Hoovs10 months ago

    This poem aches with some really beautiful lines

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